Loved this: And during the vivisection he noticed for the very first time there was nothing there. He could see right through her. All the way to Toledo. Still the heart wants what it wants.
Jeff's one lucky man. As the Good Book says, "The heart is deceitful above all things" and Jeff shouldn't listen to his heart so much. Great story, Scott! I really enjoyed it!
Loved this: And during the vivisection he noticed for the very first time there was nothing there. He could see right through her. All the way to Toledo. Still the heart wants what it wants.
Thank you, Debbi! (I did consider Dayton as well lol).
Jeff's one lucky man. As the Good Book says, "The heart is deceitful above all things" and Jeff shouldn't listen to his heart so much. Great story, Scott! I really enjoyed it!
Thanks for the kind words and the stacks
My pleasure!
Love the way this was written.
Thank you!
Hehe. Well, this twisted quite well in the end. I mean, not for her but wow, what a twist. Great post, Scott.
Thanks, Parker. I appreciate it!
Whoa, a literal bullet dodge!
Ha yes, as the kids would say, “Literally!”😊
Nice!!
Thx Stephanie!
Fantastic story! Love the rhythm, the humor, and the subtle foreshadowing.
Thank you Kathy!