Richie had it coming. Agreed, last line is perfect

cold final sentence

A satisfying piece of flash on multiple levels!

Richie should have known better than to mess with old guys - especially the ones who "still got it upstairs."

Lovely twist that fits so nicely.

Now, that is innovation. Haha. I quite enjoyed that. It's hard to sympathize with a sleaze like Richie. Awesome story, Scott.

Brilliantly done!

Left his mark